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Naani for the Japanese Poetry Club Event
One Thousand Cranes
: Little Cherub by Gypsy Blue Rose
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cold and crisp autumn breeze
brushes Cherub's rosy cheeks—
mom's precious child
made of love and laughter
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
6/7/4/6 = 23 syllables naani

Cherub = A child, with a sweet, chubby, innocent face. A celestial being often represented as a beautiful rosy-cheeked child with wings;

NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It�??�?�¢??s very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It�??�?�¢??s usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. === click here for examples -poetrysoup === click here for more information- shadowpoetry === click here for more information === poetry soup

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