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Naani for the Japanese Poetry Club Event
One Thousand Cranes
: Lonesome Bard by Gypsy Blue Rose
Dedicated to Federico Garcia Lorca, prominent 20th-century Spanish poet

 
 
lonesome bard
poured his bleeding heart
over tattered pages
saturated
with passion, love, and country


 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Bard = poet in Old English

3/5/6/4/7 = 25 syllables

NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. ===
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

     

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