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Naani for the Japanese Poetry Club Event
One Thousand Cranes
: Her Sunday Best by Gypsy Blue Rose
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dressed in her Sunday best,
child watches a lucky kid
   leave with new parents —
raindrops on the window pain
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Author Notes
A "windowpane" is a piece of glass in a window. "Window pain" is spelled wrong on purpose

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NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese poetic forms, in that it has a set line and syllable count. It has 4-lines and a total 20-25 syllables. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. ===
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