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Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 with Alliteration
One Thousand Cranes
: Wandering in the Woods by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

Wandering throughout
the woods in full fall foliage,
where leaves change colors
to Mother Nature's whimsies,
and north wind follies
    of the austere arctic air —
reddening girls' cheeks,
as they frolic amidst trees
and colorful canopies.
 


 

Author Notes
Chick is an informal word for girl

CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

     

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