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4/6/5 Haiku
Red Bird
by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes
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red cardinal's
song on the northern wind —
open-hearted
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Author Notes
Painting by Chie Yoshii
HAIKU is an unrhymed Japanese poem. It uses a juxtaposition of two images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. It alludes to a season of the year. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) BUT in English is 17 syllables OR LESS. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. use a dash before the satori (usually the last line). Avoid alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay).
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click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES
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click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
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click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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