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: The Grim's Danse Macabre by Gypsy Blue Rose
for Dean Kuch


 
 
my grief rages across the mire

to my beloved's grave

where I watch in disbelief

the Grim dancing with the dead

in a dismal black haze
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
-The Grim = is an omen of death, a shape-shifting black dog in the 17th-century.

-The Danse Macabre is a strange tradition from the Late Middle Ages. Artists depicted people dancing with decaying corpses and skeletons, to express their fascination with death.

GOGYOHKA is a five line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllables count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, metaphor are okay but never rhymes. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. wikipedia
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