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: Deep in Dew by Gypsy Blue Rose
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deep in dew,
maple leaves turn crimson red
where the horizon
welcomes the blazing sky, 
glide crisp autumn breeze
 

 

Author Notes
TANKA is a Japanese poetic form that originated in Japan's Imperial Court, where the men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka after an intimate night. This poetic form was created 1,200 years ago. FORM: It's written in a concise manner of 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary and it never rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules - click here if you want to see modern tanka examples - click here to read Tanka Society of America

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy Word Weaver
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