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: Tangerine Dusk by Gypsy Blue Rose
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tangerine dusk
melts into warm red rocks ~
sunny side up
 
 
 

Author Notes
At the end of day, the last rays of sun warms the rocks before the cold night.

EKPHRASTIC, is a poem inspired by a work of art. Often vivid and dramatic; either real or imagined; of a person, an experience, or a thing. The word comes from the Greek language, meaning: ( 'out' 'speak' 'to call an inanimate object by name').. for source click here

HAIKU is an unrhymed Japanese poem. It uses a juxtaposition of two images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. It alludes to a season of the year. The haiku is written from an observer's point of view. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) BUT in English is 17 syllables OR LESS. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. use a dash before the satori (usually the last line). Avoid alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay).
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click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES
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click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
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click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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