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Somonka for the Japanese Poetry Club
One Thousand Cranes
: Summer Breeze Kisses by Gypsy Blue Rose
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summer breeze kisses

your sunshine-tanned rugged skin

covered in peach fuzz

lying on lavender fields

midst intoxicating scent

watching your breasts move

up and down as your sweet breath

flutters in and out

I would die for you tonight

for last sunset in your eyes

 


Author Notes
Art work by Ikenaga Yasunari

The Somonka, is a Japanese verse of 2 TANKA unrhymed poems (5/7/5/7/7 - 5/7/5/7/7) exchanged between all types of love: lovers, parents, children, etc ... in a statement and response: example = wife writes tanka for husband, husband responds with his own tanka for her. UnrhymedThe earliest Somonkas can be found as far back as the 1st century AD. click here, if you like, for more information ; . click here if you want to read more

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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