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Naani Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: Nature Doesn't Know by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

through peace and war,

the same river passes by our doors

to quench the thirst

of friend and foe

 

Author Notes
4/9/4/4 = 21 syllables

NAANI, is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese poetic forms, in that it has a set line- and syllable count. It has 4-lines and a total of 20-25 syllables. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. *** click here for more information- shadowpoetry *** click here for more information-matt Forrest wordpress *** click here for examples -poetrysoup

Picture: CaƱo Cristales is a Colombian river located in the Serrania de la Macarena province of Meta and is a tributary of the Guayabero River. It was founded in 1969, by a group of cattle farmers.

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