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Modern Tanka
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: * At the End of Day * by Gypsy Blue Rose
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At the end of day, 

      laughter and passion slips away 

            as darkness envelopes 

            the dissipating memory 

            of our love

 

 


Author Notes
"Outside, daylight was bleeding slowly toward dusk." - Stephen King

MODERN TANKA is a Japanese poetic form. The form was created 1,200 years ago. It used to be written between lovers but now you can write about anything you want. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus

     

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