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A veteran's perspective.
Broken by Douglas Goff
Acrostic Poetry Contest contest entry

Pulling at me, my anguish tears
Angry and alone, nobody cares

In my thoughts I am so lost
Nobody understands the dreadful cost
Fully aware of my mental rage
Unable to advance my life's sorrowful page
Lurid memories of war, the cruelest of cage

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Author Notes
Not all war wounds are visible. Not all who survived, really survived. Although I am a veteran, I wrote this poem in honor of a family member who served in both Desert Storm and Desert Shield. The battlefields have faded away, but his mental scars have not.

These are the words that many vets use to describe their low points::
anguish
alone
lost
dreadful
rage
sorrowful
cruelest
(bold in the poem)

We sent them out and broke them. We have a responsibility to try and fix them.

     

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