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3/7/2 Modern Haiku
One Thousand Cranes
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Dark New Moon
by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes
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blind neighbor
borrows a cup of darkness —
new moon
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Author Notes
When the moon is new, it's invisible to us on Earth.
This poem is a modern haiku because I used alliteration and metaphor.
MODERN HAIKU is the English adaptation of Classic Haiku. It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but as brief as possible. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Images don't need to be taken from nature. Seasonality is optional. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. The em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Haiku usually doesn't have a title but in fanstory we have to have one. The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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