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: Sun Bleached Poster by Gypsy Blue Rose
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sun bleached poster
of missing child 
     fades into oblivion —
cold case



 


 

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Author Notes
The picture of the poster is faceless to represent any missing child.

Cold case = is an unsolved criminal investigation

National Toll-free Hotline, 1-800-THE-LOSTclick here to read more

According to the FBI, in 2021 there were 337,195 adducted missing children

MODERN SENRYU is about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but brief. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Senryu usually doesn�¢??t have a title but in fanstory we have to have one.for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

     

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