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Septolet for the Japanese Poetry Club
One Thousand Cranes
: Crisp Wind Whistles by Gypsy Blue Rose
If you want to join the Japanese poetry club, check my author notes

 

Crisp wind whistles 
through trees
sprinkled with snow.

Ice-crystal rays
spear 
cozy cabin.






 

Author Notes
SEPTOLET is an American variation of haiku. The origin is French but otherwise unknown. It is an unrhymed poem that consists of fourteen words divided in two stanzas. Both stanzas deal with the same thought and create a picture with words. You may use art with your Septolet. The first letter of first word in each stanza begins with a capital letter. Align left. No rhyming words. Period at end of each stanza. No proper nouns. Give your poem a title. shadow poetry.com -- all poetry.com

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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