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: Lying on Damp Sheets by Gypsy Blue Rose
Poem of the Month contest entry


Lying on damp sheets
stained with loneness and bad wine
as street cats in heat
meow unashamedly outside  —
we both yearn for a good catch 

 


Author Notes
TANKA is a romantic Japanese poetic form that originated in the Japanese Imperial Court, where men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka. The form was created 1,200 years ago. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules -- click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America

Paintings by Ikenaga Yasunari

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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