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A Fight To The Finish
Dribbles And Drabbles
: Cobra by Brett Matthew West
80 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry

To George's nearsighted eyes the brass-plated shower unit head resembled a poised and ready to strike cobra. He mistakenly hit the cold water tap in the dead of a frigid winter morning. Unprepared, the shower spit its icy venom directly in his face.

George shrieked bloody murder and leaped with the agility of a frightened mongoose. His shivering hand slithered towards the tap. Rapid circular motions followed. In a heartbeat the fatal attack ended.

Victorious, George exhalted in being safe.


Writing Prompt
Write a story of 80 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 80 words.

Author Notes
I am the King, by Mr Jones, complements this story.

     

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