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Lune 5/3/5 for the contest
Cotton Candy Clouds by Gypsy Blue Rose
Lune Poetry Contest contest entry

 

      cotton candy clouds
float along 
      ca
lorie-free treat

 

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Author Notes
LUNE is a short poem with three lines, similar to haiku in that it uses imagery and succinct composition. Lune poetry originated when American poets noticed that writing a haiku in English isn't the same as writing one in Japanese. Japanese words tend to have more syllables than English words and thus it forced English-language haiku to be too wordy and forced to fit the 5/7/5 syllables mold. American poet, Robert Kelly, created the lune in the 1960s. The LUNE consists of 5/3/5 syllables.

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