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Fictional Free Verse
One Thousand Cranes
: Starry Indigo Sky by Gypsy Blue Rose


Starry indigo sky
      frames my loneliness tonight
      ‘cause our song came on
      and even though you’re long gone
      old pain came on up

Music opened my heart 
      like the wind
      as it whirls a gusty song
      to the beat of my soul
      that turns turbulent
     and how could I love 
     your deceptive blue eyes
     and tempting lying lips 

Tonight, 
      the same moon 
      shines over us
      but you are forever gone
      … till our next song




 

Author Notes
Fictional Free Verse was inspired by Pablo Neruda's poems (a Chilean poet-diplomat and politician who won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1971. Neruda became known as a poet when he was 13 years old and wrote in a variety of styles, including passionate love poems.)

FREE VERSE is an open modern poetry form that arose through the French vers libre form. It does not use consistent meter patterns, rhyme, or any musical pattern. It thus tends to follow the rhythm of natural speech.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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