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Kaikai Poem for Japanese Club
Tanka Collection
: Daydreaming Again by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Daydreaming, again,
by our tree covered with hope

and bittersweet fruit 
in my deathly empty home 
with delusional desires.

 

Author Notes
About lost love

KAIKAI is a Japanese comic poetry form, a linked form that developed into a more serious form in the 17th century under the influence of MATSUO BASHO. Eventually, it became HAIKU. The form is 5/7/5/7/7 stanza that can be repeated if you like.
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem,

Gypsy

Painting -- The Day Dream, 1880 by Dante Gabriel Rossetti

     

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