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Kaikai Poem for Japanese Club
Tanka Collection
: Her Red Hair Ablaze by Gypsy Blue Rose
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her red hair ablaze
sprinkled with cherry blossoms
as the sunset dips
in the blazing horizon 
where swans sing to dying dusk

 

Author Notes
HAIKAI is a Japanese comic poetry form, a linked form that developed into a more serious form in the 17th century under the influence of MATSUO BASHO. Eventually, it became HAIKU. The form is 5/7/5/7/7 stanza that can be repeated if you like.
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Gypsy

     

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