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5/7/5 Poem
One Thousand Cranes
: Rain Kisses by Gypsy Blue Rose


rain kisses drip down
cheerful cherub's chubby cheeks —
heaven’s lullaby 

 

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Author Notes
5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules.

Painting Helen Hyde, 1914

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

     

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