Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
"Invisible Tears" (A)
Written on May 5th, 2016
By Doctor Ricky 1025
Copyright © Fanstory
'All Rights Reserved'
'Dad!
'Dad!
'Dad!
'Where am I?'
'Where are you?'
'Dad?'
No response.
"If I Could turn back Time."
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Note: The Spirit (formerly known) as
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
Rises...
In *Pain.
And, Jay's pain was caused by a car accident in 2003.
Note: Now written by Jason
...
'Dad can you hear me?'
(A Voice)
'My Sweet, Sweet, Son...
'I hear you and I think that your dad can also hear you too!'
Replies Heavenly Father.
'Where are you?'
...
'Then I can see eyes...
'As I continue to rise...
'And yes, they are watching me as I...
'And, the Eyes are now watching (with interest)
...
'Darkness now turns into a...
"Warming Light"
'As the Spirit of Me.'
'Yes, suddenly...
'Heals?'
'And, this "Warming Presence"
'Presents itself as a Being...
"All Caring and All Seeing."
"Invisible Tears"
Written by Jason Richard Smrkovsky
November 5th, 1984~
March 31st, 2003.
'And, (Fanstory reviewers)
'As I continue to Rise...
"Spiritual Eyes"
'Crying...
'But why?'
'I think I am lost but I'm going to this Heaven?'
...
'The Light parts and I come to rest.'
'Yes and, on a bed of Fluffy-White Clouds-then...
"For Crying Out Loud"
'There are Angels...
'And, they are watching me.'
'With these same...
"Invisible Eyes"
'And then the voice again...
...
'My Son!'
'My Son!'
'My Son!'
'Follow...
"The Invisible Tears to me.'
...
'And, as the Angels fly...
'Invisible tears drip and cry...
'And, I'm now yes!'
'Upon the Fluffy-White Clouds-then...
(Again, for Crying Uut Loud)
...
'So, I followed the tears of now pink.' 'And, I now think...
'I'll be all right.'
'Yes!'
'Yes, for I see my mother!'
'And she's an Angel in White!'
'Yes, now in *Sight.'
Approximate Word Count: 310.
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Author Notes
*Sight: noun
/sight/
1: faculty or power of seeing.
"Joseph Lost His sight as a baby"
SIMILAR: eyesight, vision, eyes
2: a thing that one sees or can be seen.
"Tell me when you sight London bridge"
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Note: On March 31st 2003.
And, Seventeen hours after the accident.
(In which my son would become Brain dead)
April 1st, 2003.
He was also diagnosed, "Raccooned"
Which means his eyes were swollen closed, black and blue, and as if he was in a Prize fight.
And, on this very day, over eighteen years later.
I believe in all my Broken Heart that he saw more.
Yes, then most people who are alive today!
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Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Talented Artist and Amazing Writer'cleo85'
And, Cleo's Incredible Picture Entitled, "Tears from Heaven"
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