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4/3/4/5 Modern Senryu
One Thousand Cranes
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Desolate Park
by Gypsy Blue Rose
for rules, please check my author notes
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desolate park
where we met -
your lies scattered
on infertile soil
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Author Notes
MODERN SENRYU is about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but brief. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Senryu usually doesn't have a title but in fanstory, we have to have one.for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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