Exceptional Family Story (fiction) contest entry The Perfect Day by DragonSkulls ~Family Story ~ Fiction writing prompt entry

It was a beautiful, sunny morning, so the whole family decided it would be the perfect day for a picnic. Both of the children jumped for joy, dancing in circles, laughing and singing, "Picnic, picnic, picnic." My wife said she would make us all our favorite sandwiches along with some potato salad, baked beans, coleslaw, and any other trimmings we so desired. She added that she would steep the best iced tea I'd ever tasted and lemonade for the kids. All I could do was smile and agree. She gave me a big hug and a smooch on the cheek and headed for the kitchen. It's been a long time since we've had our own parents over so, I invited them to see if they wanted to come along as well. Her dad hardly ever came to family get-togethers but, surprisingly, that day he decided to be sociable. On top of that, our fathers never really got along and didn't quite care for each other, but when they both arrived, it was like they were the best of friends. It was the same all day long. They laughed and joked and had a grand old time. It was awesome. We didn't really have a destination in mind but it didn't matter. On such a gorgeous day, anywhere we went, we all knew, it would be pristine. We headed East, I think. I don't really know, to be honest. We just went where the breeze took us. We followed a trail that stopped at the edge of this giant, magnificent pond. It was outlined with mighty mountains, where the fall trees held colors so vibrant it was nearly breathtaking. There we stood in awe, gazing at a sight only God himself could have created. "Here will be just fine," my mother softly said, smiling. I unrolled the blanket on the soft grass while my children ran to frolic at the water's edge. We couldn't have asked for a more beautiful day. It wasn't too hot nor too chilly. It was perfect. My wife started getting the settings and food prepared. "Watch, Daddy," my boy yelled as he skimmed a rock across the pond that had to bounce a good fifteen times before it went under. "Nice, son! Look at you!" His little sister had to try, of course, but with not quite as much success but with equal praise from everyone. The food was more than delicious. And she was right, it was the best tea I've ever had. The odds of us being less than ten feet from a lemon tree with the best tea I've ever had was unfathomable. We ate until we all had our fill and just sat around reminiscing about life and good times. The day seemed to stretch on forever and it was glorious. Then, we packed it all up and headed home. We bid goodnight to our parents and went inside. I turned and waved as I shut the front door to the mansion. I will admit, after the car crash that took my family and me last night, our first day in Heaven was absolutely perfect.   Writing Prompt *Read All Rules* Write a FICTIONAL story that involves a human family. The word length is minimum of 400 words with 600 words maximum. NO 'blood & guts" gory story, such as murder of people. Do NOT include time travel among characters, or 'Dear John' letters. This isn't a Thanksgiving story. Christmas may be mentioned, but it isn't a Christmas story. Do NOT have any music that automatically plays when story begins. You may use 1 picture that has no words, animation, or music, one color font with one color background, dedication line (optional) which doesn't count in word length, and author notes that may include 1 video (may have vocal sound/music). Author Notes Thanks for reading. DS

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