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Lost Tomatoes by Val Crisson
Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry
Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

Ripe red tomatoes
hang heavy on August vines
ready to be canned
Old Kerr Jars left empty
I long for my Mother's voice

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Author Notes
I love writing tanka, and I do like that every line does not have to have the exact syllable count. FYI, Kerr Jars are the old canning jars of my Mother's generation.

     

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