FanStory.com - The Judas In Himby dovemarie
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
loves betrayal na-po-wri-mo contest entry
Creative Collections
: The Judas In Him by dovemarie
Loves betrayal writing prompt entry

To him I was an object to get laid
Never thought I'd be betrayed
Years of mixed message after message
Tearing my feelings into disastrous wreckage

His "Hey, I do love you" in conversation
Gave me a wild, glowing sensation
This was his loving portrayal
Soon to blossom into withering betrayal

He left me for another
I was getting too old to suffer
Leading me on into a darkened forest
With my heart hammering 'neath my breast

A lover's fantasy
Turned to harsh reality
Never should I have given my heart
He broke it right from the very start







































































































































Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a lovers betrayal. Any length or style will be fine.

Author Notes
A man named Stephen led me on for years, then went off and had good times with a girlfriend. He had asked me to be his girlfriend, then a couple of weeks later he started hanging around with her. He was with her for 8 or 9 years, until she died.
Thanks to Stanislav Velek from Pixabay

     

© Copyright 2024. dovemarie All rights reserved.
dovemarie has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.




Be sure to go online at FanStory.com to comment on this.
© 2000-2024. FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement