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A free verse biographical poem
Bridges by Laurie Holding
    ~ Subconscious Minds ~ Contest Winner 

When I saw London Bridge, decades later,
my first thought was of you.

I remember clasping hands
while our friends walked underneath our bridge.
We sang: Falling down, Falling down.
We'd trap them and snort with laughter.

There were bridge games in our mothers' cars, too:
First, hold your breath past the old graveyard,
then, while you're crossing that Fifth Street Bridge,
lift your feet!

You are just a shadow in my life,
but one of the longest shadows, at that.
So far apart, and yet I can hear your laughter like it's coming from my backyard.

You are what made my childhood a childhood.

Oh, to climb a plum tree again!
To let our ducks swim free in that creek under the bridge, then
to return, to feed them the next day, to call them by name.

To jump rope, to hit a tetherball, to freeze in the beam of a flashlight.
To fall over laughing. To hide, to seek.
To hold our breath past that graveyard, hearts pounding.

I do all these things, still.
I seek you out and meet you many nights on the bridge,
to help still my ancient pounding heart, my racing brain.
I become nine again.

I hide behind you.
Then I sleep.



Writing Prompt
*Compose a FREE VERSE poem ( USE NO RHYMING END PATTERN ) for a REAL STORY IN A POEM ABOUT YOU--the author ~ category is BIOGRAPHICAL.
INTERNAL/CROSS RHYMING MAY BE FREELY USED
*Minimum Length 16 lines / Maximum Length 26 lines
*ONE color font / ONE color background
* ONE Picture (or not) author's choice--any source
*Author notes allowed
*Dedication, IF desired, may be added ABOVE text of poem (NOT IN the body of the poem) ~ does NOT count in total number of maximum lines
~ NO ~be SURE to follow these rules, too
*NO suites, such as haiku, 575, etc. [suite is more than 1 of the same style]
*NO animations, videos, music, or picture with ANY words on it
* NO warnings of ANY kind ~ keep poem clean
AT LEAST FIVE (5) ENTRIES MUST BE RECEIVED BEFORE VOTING BEGINS
~ Subconscious Minds ~
Contest Winner

Author Notes
I'm still working on this one, a dedication to my childhood best friend, Amy. If asked who made me laugh the very most in all of my decades here on earth, I would still name her first.

     

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