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Heart broken on a winter shore.
Cold Hard Sand by HarryT
Sijo Poem writing prompt entry

lost I walk
the ice laced shore
where our loving
                  footsteps did run

hand in hand
holding so tight
we raced along
                 wet summer sand

now the sand
very cold and hard
like my crackled
             icy heart


 


Writing Prompt
Sijo Poem:
Write a Sijo Poem on any theme. Syllable count: Theme 3,4,4,4 Elaboration:3,4,4,4 Counter Theme 3,5 Completion 4,3
I first came across this Korean traditional poetic format on Gypsy Blue Rose's FS page. Thanks Gypsy Rose for opening another poetic window.

     

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