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Heart Crafted Poems -2021
: Mirror Mirror by JLR

I peered into the hall mirror
As  I'm hoping to see clearer.
There was no light where it hung
the image I saw was young.
That's not right, I looked once more
looking ancient made me roar!
I peered into the hall mirror
As I'm hoping to see clearer.

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Author Notes
Octelle ~week of 2-5-2021
The Octelle is a poem consisting of
* 8 lines using personification and symbolism in a telling manner. *syllable count is 8/8/7/7/7/7/8/8,
*rhyme scheme is A1A2bbccA1A2. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical (refrain).

     

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