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A Quadrilew poem
The Dip by damommy


Dance with me, my love,
we’ll float across the floor.
Closer, turtledove,
to me, I do implore.
 
We’ll float across the floor,
and show how it’s done.
They’ll call for an encore,
but we’ve just begun.
 
Closer, turtledove.
You know the steps so well,
We fit hand in glove,
like clapper in a bell.
 
To me, I do implore,
join me hip to hip,
and by applause galore,
we’ll French onion dip.

 

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Author Notes
In the first verse, the poet may either start with a five or six syllable line. If the choice is five then the 'sounding' syllable count is (and opposite if the count is six):

Rhyme scheme: a,b,a,b

VERSE ONE,
Line 1, 5 syllables.
Line 2, 6 syllables.
Line 3, 5 syllables.
Line 4, 6 syllables.

VERSE TWO,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 2 of the FIRST verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.

VERSE THREE,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 3 of the first verse) has 5 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 6 syllables.

VERSE FOUR,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 4 of the first verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.

     

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