immigrants seeking
safe haven among strangers —
greener on that side
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Author Notes
Picture: Migrants arriving in Greece on a Turkish boat, whose owner was later arrested in Turkish waters. LESBOS, GREECE 11/16/2015 --taken by Ulrik Hasemann, a photojournalist
''greener on that side'' is a version of ''greener on the other side'' syllable rules
Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
If you would like to read the previous chapters, scroll up to the top right corner and click on the blue numbers after the word CHAPTER: (1, 2, 3, â?¦ etc)
Thank you very much for reading me,
Gypsy
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