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A Hemmed Ballad
The Elf's Umbrella by damommy
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While walking on this cold gray day,
I spied me quite a sight!
An elf umbrella by the way
stood waiting bright and white.
I wondered who had left it there,
who stuck it down without a care.
 
I hid behind a tree to stare
and find who came to claim
this brolly with its special flair
and see who was to blame.
I sat down on a mossy rock.
This mystery I must unlock.
 
I waited, patient, taking stock.
I had a ways to go
to get back home and beat the clock,
but, oh, I had to know.
Just then I heard a jaunty pace
soon followed by a shining face.
 
At sight of me, he stopped in place.
I feared he was afraid.
He turned to run, I joined the chase
through every grassy blade.
When caught, he screamed, began to wail,
but settled down to tell his tale.
 
He’d sheltered with a sprite so frail
from cold and driving rain.
A fairy saw them through the gale -
she‘d thought their hearts were twain.
So out of spite, and that was all . . .
 
the fairy stole his parasol.

 

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Author Notes
I took this photo in my yard last year after a lot of rain.

Hemmed Ballad
This is lyenochka, Helen's, new poetic form call the "hemmed ballad". It starts with the typical ballad quatrain (8/6/8/6) with an abab rhyme then concludes the quatrain with a summarizing rhyming couplet (8/8) cc rhyme. It is a way of telling a short snippet of a story then reflecting on that bit of information with a couplet afterwards. To sew the stanzas together, the last rhyme used starts the first line's rhyme of the next stanza. Optional ending with a final couplet for a conclusion.

     

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