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The Killing Wall by Jay Squires
75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.






Wrists bound behind me, I trace pocks in the wall.
 
Before our masking, we faced our executioners. Ten smooth-faced youths. One for each prisoner. None knows which rifle holds the blank.
 
Didn't Socrates say: “If you hear the shot, yours was the blank.”?
 
A foreign command. Ten bolts slide across oiled chambers. The “Ready”?
 
A sudden stench of urine overwhelms.
 
Another untranslated bark… The “Aim”?
 
I fish-gulp oxygen. Warmth suffuses my crotch.
 
I listen intensely.


 

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