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5/7/5 Renga - Chapter 73

A chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book

Brilliant Break of Day

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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brilliant break of day

illuminates all creatures —

grateful sentients


 


 




Sentient means "feeling," Having senses able to smell, communicate, touch, see, or hear.

follows chapter 72 by mermaids

God's messenger flies through dark
valleys-tranquility reigns
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Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.

Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.

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If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.

Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.

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Thank you very much for reading me,

Gypsy


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