Young Adult Poetry posted August 26, 2020


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Jealousy poem entry

The Best?

by Raul1

I despise you being better
than me,
I'm a fool you see,
I am always a loser to you,
you are mistake-free.

To you, I'm less than zero,
I make mistakes,
but you don't.
Me agreeing you're better than me,
I won't.

You're perfection,
I wish it were me,
don't you see?

I still envy you,
if all this is true,

than I am
jealous of you.
It should be me being perfect, 
and not you.



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