General Fiction posted August 12, 2020


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The Thumb

by pome lover

Through the eyes of a child Contest Winner 

 

Ooooo, what are these things?
They move! And wiggle, ha ha, and... I can... wave them around. ow! They hit me in the face ... waaaaa, waaaaaaaaaaaa.
Sniffle sniff... oooo...I found some more!! They move, too!  Oh, boy!
This is fun, and look...there's more up there! ... up in the air.  Ha ha ha, Wiggly things up in the air.  ha ha ha. 
They can't hit me from up there. Maybe I can pull them down ...ummm, they taste good, oops!   Come back. Come ... I can't reach them.
Umm ...I'm (yawn) getting ... sleepy.  I think I'll.... what's this? It's coming right at my mou... Ummm, ummm, tastes goo... zzzzzzzzzzzz



Writing Prompt
Write a short story (100-500 words). The story must include a child's perspective of an object or situation. The story may be told from the viewpoint of the child, or an adult.

Through the eyes of a child
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