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The experience of being in the womb

A chapter in the book Carolina Pastorals

Outer Banks pt.1: Bodie Island

by estory

The ancient sea breaks on the land
in waves that whisper over the sand

Echoing your mother's sacred breathing
and taking you back to the beginning

Before you were born.
Cradled in the womb

Water pulses with a heartbeat
underneath the dreams of sleep.

Larger than life,
the first glimmer of light

Out beyond the edge of horizon
like a window drawn open

Where children running in fresh air
after drifting clouds and stars

Give hope to the spirit in the form,
like the bright moon rising over the ocean.




I've always been fascinated by how the sound of waves on the shore seems to echo that sound of a mother's breathing we hear in the womb. Perhaps that's why the sea has such a peaceful feel to it for us, why it is perceived as such a sublime place. I created this in a couplet form with loose slightly off rhyme to try and emulate that rhythm of waves coming in on the beach. Bodie Island is one of the barrier islands in the outer banks of North Carolina. This is the first of four parts exploring this region of the state and the experience of the sea and shore in our society and culture. estory
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