General Poetry posted July 21, 2020 Chapters:  ...18 19 -20- 21... 


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a 7/7 poem following June Sargent's haiku

A chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book

Tumbleweeds

by Gypsy Blue Rose

south wind susurrus whispers

of tumbleweed rustling sounds




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susurrous is a soft sound

Thank you very much for reading me,

Gypsy

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Renga so far...

Chapter one by Gypsy Blue Rose

pigeon plum flowers
bend but not break in the storm
at Indian Key
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Chapter two by June Sargent

storm clouds flee as new day dawns
berries ripen and birds wait
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Chapter three by Pam (respa)

colorful songbirds
gather for spring's ripe berries
bountiful harvest
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Chapter four by Mrs KT

Winged frenzy ignites orchard;
Garnet gems pecked to their death
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Chapter five by Gloria

funeral procession
seed boats drift to a footbridge--
the orchard withdraws
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Chapter six by June Sargent

willow sways in summer breeze
while secret lovers giggle
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Chapter seven by Bill Schott

as lovers linger
red ocean brings back berries
the wine washes in
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Chapter eight by Lyenochka

sun sweetened grapes become wine
divining truth from love's lips
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Chapter nine by Ulla

love grows and ripens
while nature multiplies its
palette of colours.
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Chapter ten by Ameen

Autumn's tones enveloped me
in a warm rainbow landscape
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Chapter eleven by Margaret Bernar

Tender sacrifice
renders one fragile and strong -
Love's unique nature
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Chapter twelve by Zanya

Twilight tints evening skyline
Cooler breezes ripple shore
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Chapter thirteen by June Sargent

wrapped in silken robes
of gold, autumn bids farewell -
first breath of winter
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Chapter fourteen by Dolly

Earth's freeze grips with snowy ice,
to calm, with peaceful silence.
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Chapter fifteen by Rama Devi

blanketed by snow
leaf-whispers enter deep sleep
hushed serenity
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Chapter sixteen by Gypsy Blue Rose

cold whirlwind whistles over
Mount Fuji's peaks and valleys
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Chapter seventeen by Royowen

Kaleidoscopic
dust gathers the frosted light,
panoramic gems.
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Chapter eighteen by Marjon Van Bruggen

winds from the south bring yellow
Sahara desert sand skies
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Chapter nineteen by June Sargent

prickly pear cactus
caressed by warm summer breeze
crimson heart opens
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Chapter twenty by Gypsy Blue Rose

south wind susurrous whispers
of tumbleweed rustling sounds
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Chapter twenty one by Gypsy Blue Rose

farmer prays for rain
for drought-stricken olive trees
resilient souls
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Chapter twenty two by DeboraDyess

Rainbow's sharp, dazzling colors
sitting atop sun-struck clouds

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Chapter twenty three by June. Sargent

lighthouse shines through fog
guiding boat 'round jagged rocks -
wives cook hot chowder
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