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Haiku for the Renga book

A chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book

First Breath

by June Sargent

wrapped in silken robes
of gold, autumn bids farewell -
first breath of winter




Renga is Japanese collaborative poetry in which alternating stanzas, of 5-7-5 stanza and 7-7 couplets are linked in succession by multiple poets. The most famous renga master was Matsuo Basho.

Guest poets check the last stanza in the renga book to know what to write next.

Try not to repeat words from one stanza to the next.

Renga starts with first chapter, Pigeon Plum Flowers a #1-- 5/7/5 haiku.

Followed by a #1-- 7/7 couplet that relates to #1 haiku

Followed by a #2-- 5/7/5 stanza that relates to #1-- 7/7 couplet

Followed by a #2-- 7/7 couplet that relates to #2-- 5/7/5
.....repeated up to 100 stanzas Source: Wikipedia

To contribute to this book, just click on the icon ADD CHAPTER. If you need help, please contact Gypsy Blue Rose. You post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. you can edit it and add a picture if you like. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.

The language is often pastoral, incorporating words and images associated with seasons, nature, and love. In order for the poem to achieve its trajectory, each poet writes a new stanza that leaps from only the stanza preceding it. This leap advances both the thematic movement as well as maintaining the linking component.
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