Writing Poetry posted July 18, 2020


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On the Rocks

by HarryT

"I'll have Scotch rocks, bartender"
 “I needed that...another please”
 
God, stop the haunting,
the wanting, the needing
 
"Bartender another Scotch rocks"
 
No calm any longer
no balm can soothe
I'm adrift without her
 
"One more, bartender"

Oh no, her face, her face
 
Damn her face


Another, make it a double

Thanks, bartender she's
finally gone.


 



The Drink Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem. You (or your character) take a sip of a drink and feel different. What happens?
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