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My Paradise Lost.

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Paradise Lost?

by Ricky1024


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"Paradise Lost?"
Written on July 4th, 2020
By Doctor Ricky 1024 and
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
Copyright © Fanstory 2020
'All Rights Reserved

'Spinning Waters engulf me...
'I'm so delirious that I can no longer Sea?'
'Lord God where areth Eye?'
'I am as if...
"Blinded by the Light!"
...
'I hear rushing waters?' 'Rushing waters Engulfing me!'
'I still cannot see and my mind?'
'My mind is running on empty this time!'
'What time you see?'
'It's time now for me!'
'And yes, me!'
'As I now have to go on and move ever forward.'
'Ever forward and away from the Sea!'
...
'You Lord God finally took the Darkness away!'
'Yes!'
'You are God!'
'Dad and yes!'
'The view is so very Beautiful this day."
...
'Yes, I am now above that when we grieve!'
'And yes!''
'I see brilliant colors like now surrounding me!'
'Astounding me!'
...
'Dad, I so wish you too!'
'I am astounded as the message is clear and I had not a clue?'
'Yes, not a clue what to do?'
'As for now?'
'I Lost Paradise and where God's now sending me?'
Amen.
"Pure Heaven!"
Approximate Word Count:197





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