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My thoughts on evaporation

A chapter in the book Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Is

Displacement of Sea?

by Ricky1024

"Displacement of Sea?"
Written on June 30th, 2020
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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Evaporation processing as billions of events?
An emptying of the sea?
At the source?
As suns searing rays...
Surface surfing!
Lashing out with Eternal Maddening!
No relief as driplets dissolve into early Graves!
...
Ray's continue relentlessly in their ways...
Ever searching, ever relaying a message of displacement?
An emptying of a flooded basement?
An appointment as evaporation laughing and laughing meticulously?
An operation?
Can she ask for more?
Lapping and Laughing..
Mocking meticulously at the shore?
...
The Continuation processes relentless.
The roaring surf suffering?
The gulls laugh with Glee in search of an early submerged victory?
...
Perhaps an early meal?
Balance...
Equalisation ..
Revelation...
Resurrection?
Blackened clouds gather and move ever closer...
Seeking and mocking as evaporation is no longer trying?
But now crying!
...
Lightning flashes a message as Thunder claps!
As the Sea"s foams caps.
As rain pours!
Ever forward...
Ever precious rain!
Pours forth!
With an everlasting cry...
Evaporation dies?
Approximate word count: 184




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