General Poetry posted May 4, 2020


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Free verse poetry

God loves me, Man loves me not

by heavenempress

God meditates on true love;
But man meditates on love

Man says love is mutual
God teaches true love knows no limits

Man says love is a feeling
God teaches that true love is life giving

Man says love is a contract
God teaches that true love is a covenant

Man says love is carnal pleasure
God teaches that true love is joy eternal

Man says love is emotionally driven
God teaches that true love is self driven

Man teaches that love is a flicker of light
God teaches that true love is the sun itself

Man says love is like rainfall droplets
God teaches that true love is like heaven's open floodgates

True love is generous;
And it begs no reward.

God meditates on true love;
But Man meditates on love.



He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not writing prompt entry
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Write a love poem. It can be humorous, romantic or spiritual.
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