General Poetry posted April 4, 2020


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haiku-tattered windblown clouds

by Val Crisson


tattered windblown clouds
let golden light filter through
illumination



Haiku contest entry

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I chose to do the traditional 5/7/5 count on this one, which is rare for me but I liked the flow. Also, the title should read (haiku) tattered windblown clouds but it wouldn't allow the space in the title line. Thank you for reading.
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