Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 31, 2006 | Chapters: | ...10 11 -12- 13... |
2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 Greed do mess worlds, put wise in dilemma
A chapter in the book Oh Life!
Greedy!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
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As wise readers wished, I have endeavoured to compose this free verse poem, not a Rictameter in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 syllables; no, this is not a free verse poem contest entry
This is an independent Chapter 12 / 22 of the Book
Lesser punctuation is intentional in this free verse poem; poetic license used
Man includes woman
Man is greedy
Man is mortal
Man is not perfect
God create(s) man; there are wise and fools like light and dark or day and night
Greedy = means and refers to a greedy man or greedy men; poetic licence used
Wise = means and refers to a wise man or wise men; poetic licence used
Greedy comment(s) on anything or anyone instantly
Wise comments slowly, expressively and wisely
Wise visualize(s) slowly, timelessly and wisely; poetic licence used
God bless(es)
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As wise readers wished, I have endeavoured to compose this free verse poem, not a Rictameter in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 syllables; no, this is not a free verse poem contest entry
This is an independent Chapter 12 / 22 of the Book
Lesser punctuation is intentional in this free verse poem; poetic license used
Man includes woman
Man is greedy
Man is mortal
Man is not perfect
God create(s) man; there are wise and fools like light and dark or day and night
Greedy = means and refers to a greedy man or greedy men; poetic licence used
Wise = means and refers to a wise man or wise men; poetic licence used
Greedy comment(s) on anything or anyone instantly
Wise comments slowly, expressively and wisely
Wise visualize(s) slowly, timelessly and wisely; poetic licence used
God bless(es)
Picture borrowed free download from internet
*Background is incomplete, FS did not provide adequate space; now I am unable to access, I will change replacing the incomplete background with edited Background (as shown); I am sorry for the inconvenience;
Background (Edited)*
The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions
Thank you for reading and writing a fair review
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