Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 31, 2006 Chapters:  ...10 11 -12- 13... 


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2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 Greed do mess worlds, put wise in dilemma

A chapter in the book Oh Life!

Greedy!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


Pl read Author Notes; enjoy a freely composed free verse poem in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 syllables; greedy comment(s) on anything, any action or anyone instantly and put wise in dilemma, temporarily


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The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers the experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimen
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Greedy!
Haste to see, pass
comments, views, remarks just
think, boast, chat, pride poor like fools
wink, escape or ignore keys, what-why-how?
Waste, lose resources at both ends
mess, shade wise for some time
leave no deep mark
Greedy!



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As wise readers wished, I have endeavoured to compose this free verse poem, not a Rictameter in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 syllables; no, this is not a free verse poem contest entry


This is an independent Chapter 12 / 22 of the Book


Lesser punctuation is intentional in this free verse poem; poetic license used


Man includes woman


Man is greedy


Man is mortal


Man is not perfect


God create(s) man; there are wise and fools like light and dark or day and night


Greedy = means and refers to a greedy man or greedy men; poetic licence used


Wise = means and refers to a wise man or wise men; poetic licence used


Greedy comment(s) on anything or anyone instantly


Wise comments slowly, expressively and wisely


Wise visualize(s) slowly, timelessly and wisely; poetic licence used


God bless(es)


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