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My Human Being (A)

by Ricky1024


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"My Human Being" (A)
(In God's Lonely, and Darkroom)
Written on January 17th, 2006
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright �???�?�© Fanstory 2006
'All Rights Reserved'

"The Human Being."
"A Concoction of Flesh, Blood, and Bone."
"Magnificent in every form!'"
"Adorned and created...
"Established by an Entity...
"Our Fate?"
"Just too immense to appreciate!"
...
"Like the sugery, last, drop of syrup from the "Tree of Life."
"And, if only you would conceive?"
"Then only you could believe!'
...
"Believe oh, how glorious!"
"Believe oh, so wonderful!"
"If Thee so believe?"
"You will be filled with His Holy Spirit and Grace!"
...
"The Human Being"
"A Concoction of Flesh, Blood, and Bone."
"And, if you don't have Faith?"
"Ye shall walk alone with but a glimmer of Hope."
"Forever."
"In God's Lonely, Damp, and, Dark *Room."

"The InHuman Being" (B)
(In Satan's Evil Lair!)
Written on February 25th, 2020
By Doctor Ricky 1024

"It lurks in the Darkness of Night and awaits!"
"Cunning, Cruel, Merciless!"
"Tried and true Below and UnBlessed!"
...
"It's created for only reason?"
"To satisfy it's ever growing needs...
"It's unquenchable thirst!"
"Unquenchable thirst for Blood!"
...
"This Demon demonstrats and is demanding you!'
'Understanding of it's needs!"
"And, when it strikes?"
"Mayhem!"
...
"Perhaps you too have one living with you?"
"Could be in Human Form?"
"It comes in many disguises?"
"Maybe your own mom?"
"Maybe it could be your dad?"
"And, you been had!"
...
"Could this thing possibly be a brother or sister?"
"Quite sinister?"
"How about an Aunt or a Uncle?"
'No?'
"Grandma or Grandpa?"
'Too old!'
"Okay then Barbara Hensongispsaca."
Hmm....
...
"It could be your husband, like Barbara or maybe a wife?"
"Like mine, who left me in deep debt, and then took her life!"
"Or perhaps your fiancee or just your new and recent best friend?"
They say...
"Best friends to the very End?"
"But you will never know until it is too late!"
...
"Why?'
"Its Force-fed with Hate!"
"Ever growing, all knowing!"
"And, nothing seems to slow it down!"
"Why?"
"Because it comes from Hell!"






ApproximateWord Count: 417
*Room: n.
place, enclosure, container.

Note:
"This was written on January 17th, 2006 in Ancora State Mental Hospital in Ancora, New Jersey."
...
Note:
Warning!
Graphic!
"On December 1st, 2006."
(After the loss of my only son Jason on March 31st, 2003)
(Followed on November 23rd, 2003 with the loss of my only wife Carolyn)
"In return?"
"I virtually lost my Mind."
...
"I woke up about 8:oo AM. in the morning."
"I released my Pomeranian.'
(Puffer)
"And, told him to find a better place to live."
"There was a slight Rain, as I remember clearly."
"I went into the kitchen and grabbed a Seven inch serrated steak knife."
"And, with no pain, shoved it into my chest twice."
(Hoping to hit the Heart)
"But, instead I missed the Heart but hit the Heart valve."
...
"And now, bleeding internally, not satisfied with that."
(Even though my Guinea tee was bright Crimson Red)
...
"I again, picked up that now bloody knife."
"But this time?"
"I slashed the side of my neck three times."
(Hoping to hit the jugglar)
...
"Now if you are still with me?"
"At this point?"
"I went into my room and told to die."
"And, told my son Jason...
'I'm coming.'
...
"Now, since I clot well, I was unsuccessful but I was dying inside internally."
"And, I did not know this when I decided to do it the old-fashioned way with a bottle of pills."
...
"So, I took a whole bottle of Depakote which is used for seizures and depression "
"This will not kill you."
...
"At this point, and with no choice left...
"And, after taking in a phone call from my ex-girlfriend Nancy...
"And, after her stating that she didn't like my tone of voice...
"And, after we just recently broke up...
"I have no choice but to call 911."
"For she too had a Heart condition."
...
"If you know anybody that feels incredibly horrible with no hope left?'
"Please call 9-11."
....
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Amazing Artist and Talented Writer,
'cleo85'
And, her Incredible Picture Entitled, "Waiting for God"
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