Commentary and Philosophy Fiction posted February 11, 2020


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Routines are sometimes meant to be broken...

Shake It Up!!

by Y. M. Roger


The elevator stopped at fourteen. He got on. Like always.
 
On descent, we stared up at the numbers. Just like always.
 
But today, I was determined to change our ‘always’ lobby part. The doors opened, and he stepped aside, indicating I should exit first. Surprising him, I turned and smiled and indicated he go first.
 
We both laughed.
 
Mission accomplished.

 



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