General Flash Fiction posted February 5, 2020


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A 70-word story

The Communion

by RodG


I bowed my head as I received the Eucharist.

"He who eats my flesh and drinks my blood abides in me," intoned the old priest.

"Thank you, Father. I truly looked forward to Holy Communion, seeing you again."

"Has it been a long year for you, Joseph? You don't look well."

"Yes . . . very."

"How much longer?"

"Ages."

The guard opened my cell's door."

"Hope to see you next year, Father."




70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a flash fiction story. 70 words exactly. Title not included in count.


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