Biographical Poetry posted February 2, 2020


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My brother died suddenly (2005) changing our lives forever.

If I Could

by Mary Kay Bonfante

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Her brother's laughter, dreams and fears still echo softly;
His sister thinks of all the summers in the sand.
But when John, he got his gee-tar, he was in his heart a rock star,
Whenever he was playing with the band.

John, you were, that sure and steady beat,
Behind the scenes to make the sound complete.
Rising, falling, up and down, you kept the rhythm strong,
And in our hearts we'll always hear your song.

John would put down legal tender for a Gibson or a Fender,
He got down with all the low notes in the book.
John got wood to cut and polish,
Sand and weld and buff and varnish,
To make every guitar lover stop and look.

John, you were, a sweet and gentle giant,
Seems you did not live out all your days.
Your mother's kiss is on the wind, your sister's love remains,
And deep inside your music ever plays.

From his window on a good day,
John could see the world in his way,
Then go rockin' and a-rollin' where he would.
Now he's free to rock where angels fly,
But when I hear our mother cry,
I'd bring him back to play on, if I could.

John, you were, a diamond in the rough,
We had you, but we didn't have enough;
With faith just as a mustard seed, our God he carried you,
To where every perfect note rings loud and true...
To where every perfect note rings loud and true.

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Rhyming Poem contest entry

Recognized

#1063
2020


I know my rhyme scheme for this poem is very irregular, and even the number of lines per stanza varies towards the end. Some rhymes are in the middle of the lines (besides the main ones). I analyzed the pattern, for anyone who is interested:
XAbBA CCDD eEFgGF XHXH IIJKKJ LLMMM

I was just pouring out my heart, and that was how I wrote it.

My brother John died in 2005 of Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA), less than six months after I married my husband, Jorge. He still got to "give me away," along with my Mom, which will always be a most precious memory. (My father passed away in 2001).

John was my only "full" brother -- from both my parents. We grew up together, two years apart. My father later remarried and had a second family, from which I have three more siblings and 10 nieces and nephews. But John was the only one I was raised with, and close to me in age -- we were very close.

I also posted this poem on my John A. Gunning Memorial page on Facebook, which I created last year. In the immediate aftermath of John's death in 2005, writing poetry about it was one of the few things I could do to keep myself sane.
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