Biographical Poetry posted February 2, 2020 |
My brother died suddenly (2005) changing our lives forever.
If I Could
by Mary Kay Bonfante
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Rhyming Poem contest entry
Recognized |
I know my rhyme scheme for this poem is very irregular, and even the number of lines per stanza varies towards the end. Some rhymes are in the middle of the lines (besides the main ones). I analyzed the pattern, for anyone who is interested:
XAbBA CCDD eEFgGF XHXH IIJKKJ LLMMM
I was just pouring out my heart, and that was how I wrote it.
My brother John died in 2005 of Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA), less than six months after I married my husband, Jorge. He still got to "give me away," along with my Mom, which will always be a most precious memory. (My father passed away in 2001).
John was my only "full" brother -- from both my parents. We grew up together, two years apart. My father later remarried and had a second family, from which I have three more siblings and 10 nieces and nephews. But John was the only one I was raised with, and close to me in age -- we were very close.
I also posted this poem on my John A. Gunning Memorial page on Facebook, which I created last year. In the immediate aftermath of John's death in 2005, writing poetry about it was one of the few things I could do to keep myself sane.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. XAbBA CCDD eEFgGF XHXH IIJKKJ LLMMM
I was just pouring out my heart, and that was how I wrote it.
My brother John died in 2005 of Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA), less than six months after I married my husband, Jorge. He still got to "give me away," along with my Mom, which will always be a most precious memory. (My father passed away in 2001).
John was my only "full" brother -- from both my parents. We grew up together, two years apart. My father later remarried and had a second family, from which I have three more siblings and 10 nieces and nephews. But John was the only one I was raised with, and close to me in age -- we were very close.
I also posted this poem on my John A. Gunning Memorial page on Facebook, which I created last year. In the immediate aftermath of John's death in 2005, writing poetry about it was one of the few things I could do to keep myself sane.
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